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When it rains it pours,
Our brittle souls can't take anymore.
Death pounding at the door,
As if it was an angry neighbor.
Gradually it busts the door down,
Not making a scene or sound.
Escaping out of your chest,
Doing the best,
To be a tornado made of hell.
Doing well,
At hurting the surroundings.
You're running,
Meaning to show the scars,
But it has gone too far,
As you begin to burn everything in you path.
Other's still can't do the math.
They blame you,
Everything you do,
An excuse,
Can't be made.
The scars....Do you even want them to fade?

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:iconclarissabelle:
=clarissabelle Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good. Usually when people do an AABB rhyme scheme they mess up, but you really made this work. I like it.
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~xXxstitchezxXx Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconclarissabelle:
=clarissabelle Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome :)
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~FlameFrost101 Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoah. That... Whoah!
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:iconxxxstitchezxxx:
~xXxstitchezxXx Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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:iconmiss-kitty-bunbun:
~Miss-Kitty-Bunbun Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful and epic.

; u ;
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:iconxxxstitchezxxx:
~xXxstitchezxXx Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconmiss-kitty-bunbun:
~Miss-Kitty-Bunbun Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome.
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